In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by goodygrrl:
I like the lighting conditions, but this did not strike me as a very original composition. The viewers knowledge of this particular book is what holds it, instead of it's visual aspects.

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by David.C:
I do not know if the page was suppose to be white, but with the age marks on it I would doubt it (no impact on scoring), but the page would have looked better without the creases.

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by ExoticChaos:
Bit soft for my taste and the white balance seems off. I like the composition and the red ribbon though.

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by L1:
Dark areas at top are distracting. Good idea.

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by skief:
Be careful with your spelling in the title, "In the Beginning" Maybe a title like "Power to Speak the Universe into Existence" would make the tie closer to the theme, instead of having to figure it out. The crease in the page as well as the lack of sharpness in the words hurts the photo IMO.

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by DBoy:
small picture. The text is a bit blurry. You could have improve it with higher contrast or some sharpening

In the Begining
by daveit

Comment by SharQ:
I kinda-sorta see where you are coming from, but I can't stand the fact that people seem to have to use religious themes every bloody entry. Besides, the actual picture conveys no strength at all - it is the book in the picture. So on a challenge named "funny", I could include a DVD cover of The Mask? I don't think so. SOrry, don't like it. (1)

Forgotten Time
by daveit

Comment by felispardalis:
Great color, nice form, some distractions in photo tho like grass in foreground

Forgotten Time
by daveit

Comment by garlic:
Nice subject. Seems litle out of focus or unsharp but it doesn´t hurt the image alot. The background and also the foreground seems interesting. Technically pretty well done.

Forgotten Time
by daveit

Comment by fredluvsHim:
I like this photo. Good!