Wendy
by kevrobertson

Comment by edmeng:
I̢۪m not professional, just personal opinion: Her hands seem a little overexposed and this piece of cloth right in front looks rather distracting. Lighting is great.
I hope this will help.

Wendy
by kevrobertson

Comment by Prof_Fate:
the hand is too bright, the sleeve distracting. the pose is OK, it's just the sleeve sits up a bit.

hair overall needs combed. I agree the eyes are a tad dark, but that doesn't bother me - the lighting on the face is really pretty good. I think the overall look is at odds with itself - highkey BG and the hand is bright, but the face is dark. Try darkening the BG and see if that helps balance things a bit.

Nice tones, good b&w conversion.

Wendy
by kevrobertson

Comment by SamDoe1:
I'm going to agree with everything has been said already and suggest maybe some post process to get rid of some of the extra lines and bring out a little more catchlight in the eyes. Very nicely done, and great pose.

Wendy
by kevrobertson

Comment by kdkaboom:
Hi! It's a nice photo, but the highlights are a bit too bright. (Mainly: forehead, nose, hand) The sleeve is kinda in the way, too. Also, there are some lines on her forehead that I can't tell if it's stray hairs or facial lines. That is very minor, tho. It's a nice pose - her eyes are spot on. Her eyes look serious, but her mouth is smirking. I think that gives the photo a little extra oomph :)

Very nice :)

Wendy
by kevrobertson

Comment by ericwoo:
The bright light on the forehead is rather overpowering, making her eyes and eyebrows appear to be sunken. Also, the sleeve is a bit distracting. I'd like to see more lighting to fill the shadows and to bring out those catch lights that you have started there. Nice composition and a great shot with just a few adjustments.

Resting
by kevrobertson

Comment by espy2:
I don't usually like comments or give them, but since candids are near and dear to my heart, I have decided to comment on every photo in this challenge.

I could have sworn I saw this woman in forum who had just bought eggs? LOL...Nice tones, nice character to the face, but not much else of interest to me as to an emotion portrayed. It's a 5 vote from me.

IMG_4620-01.jpg
by kevrobertson

Comment by xtine:
nice shot Kev,like the duotone too.
Christine

Resting
by kevrobertson

Comment by yanko:
Good image.

Reaching out
by kevrobertson

Comment by eschelar:
Flash seems more than a tad harsh here.

Nice concept in the picture though.

This Ole House
by kevrobertson

Comment by Herblacklist12:
This is brilliant. I am stunned.