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by kevrobertson

Comment by kenskid:
I feel it is a nice shot except for the yellow cast. Looks like the whole thing is yellow. Teeth usually have a yellow tint that can be touched up in PS.

Work with the whole shot to move the yellow.

Hot and Cold
by kevrobertson

Comment by ShannonLee:
what in the heck is going on here? why is there a chair on the wall? 9

Hot and Cold
by kevrobertson

Comment by cars:
a little obvious outline around the shoulders---great shot

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by kevrobertson

Comment by ignite:
I think you took this picture with a normal focal length. Gives the impression of foreshortening, don't like the way the legs appear. Move back and use a longer focal length to get close. A bit of color correction and contrast can make this super.

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by kevrobertson

Comment by NathanWert:
I'm going to have to agree with everyone else. This one is the best of the lot. If not remove the mole, lighten it up a little more. Removing it completely changes who she is.

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by kevrobertson

Comment by joewoo:
great shot...

yeah... clone her neck though...

Hot and Cold
by kevrobertson

Comment by lastef:
This is definitely an artistic shot with the paper on the wall and the chair. A bit grainy and the person is a bit todark.

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by kevrobertson

Comment by trnqlty:
This is definetly my favorite of the bunch. The lighting is real nice, hair works well and I can't help but wonder what she is thinking about or looking at. Good job and keep shooting these.

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by kevrobertson

Comment by trnqlty:
Excellent tight crop head shot. Love the nice soft skin from the even lighting and also perfect light skin tone. There are small things I might play with like sharpening her mouth a tad or perhaps her left(acutally right) eye but you pretty much nailed this on. Great job!

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by kevrobertson

Comment by trnqlty:
The pose here is pretty nice, fairly relaxed, although I sort of wish she was doing a little something more with her hands but it's hard to say what. I find that the most difficult part of modeling along with the expression. This could also use that yellow cast removed. You've lost the whites of her eyes but you may be able to dodge them enough to get a little detail. The only other thing is what looks like sensor dust on the wall in the background.