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rileyComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
I would love to know this lady, her hands have a pretty much been there done that look, and that has worked well for this picture.
Composition:
Nice composition. This works pretty well, and from the voters comments they have generally really liked this.
Subject:
Lovely choice of subject matter, which defiantely meets the challenge - in a cool out of the box manner.
Technical (Colour and light):
Thie lighting used is good. I am not totally convinced with the copping as the other blurred hand isn't adding much to the picture.
To grow its vote?:
I thin kthat you are well on your way as shown in the rest of your portfolio.
Summary:
Well done, keep up the great work and thinking out of that box.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
Photographer found comment helpful.