Away from it All
by elsapo

Comment by heida:
I love this picture, got some great mood in it and I like the high contrast in it too, I gave it a top score! and I just noticed it has the same title as my last entry :-)

Away from it All
by elsapo

Comment by cghubbell:
Feels like the exposure balance between foreground and background is a bit off. I think tilting the image would also improve it a bit.

Intermingle
by elsapo

Comment by mariomel:
Cool abstract.

Shining Through
by elsapo

Comment by banmorn:
I got some of these today....I shot BW only and I'm thinking, after seeing this, that color might have been better....rats! Quite nice. A litte blown out in the right center but the rays are very well done.

Composition 1
by elsapo

Comment by admart01:
Greeting from the Critique Club (you have the dubious honor of being my first!!)

Meets the challenge topic for sure, wonderfully undefineable abstract

I really like the shifting colors and "bubble" feel. You've worked the refracted light well and by varying the colors added to the interest. I agree with others' comments on the lower part, a bit more variation of color/light would help. A bit of "too much of a good thing"

Please feel free to pm me with any questions.

Theresa

Shining Through
by elsapo

Comment by marbo:
Nice crepuscular rays.

Intermingle
by elsapo

Comment by photom:
Interesting, nice high key - and would make a good image for the reception area of an office building. But dummy me, I just don't get much "opposite" - even tho the primary colors are complimentary on a color wheel.

Shining Through
by elsapo

Comment by dhare:
I love sun rays, and you've captured them well here.

Shining Through
by elsapo

Comment by Brooklyn513:
Seems to lack a subject. Intense sky but it needs something to grab you as well.

Intermingle
by elsapo

Comment by Glen King:
I'm not sure about opposites, but the pic rocks. I'd really like to know your technique on this.