My Toys Mu Toys
by loudzgamer

Comment by rblanton:
To me this seems a nice picture for a family album and would hold a cherished spot there. However here in a photographic challenge the family album type picture is up for public viewing and by posting it there invites public praise, indifference or apathy. The flash detracts from the picture and gives the face unnatural colors, harsh ones that belie the soft skin of a child. It appears that someone pulling the child out of the fram which feels a bit artificial, if you intended to show force depriving the child of her toys then I feel it should have been a bit bolder show of that force. I like the thought of a child separated from its treasure trove without seeing ruination and despair in the child. Perhaps the idea needs a bit more polishing but it does hold to the theme. Hope this was not too harsh, just meant for it to be constructive.

My Toys Mu Toys
by loudzgamer

Comment by PhotoRyno:
cute baby, to much clutter

lunch is out there
by loudzgamer

Comment by TooCool:
Nicely done c@t shot! Almost looks like she was an afterthought. Hope your not getting shot down by the c@t haters....
TC

lunch is out there
by loudzgamer

Comment by mcrochip:
Unless that box framed by the leaves at the bottom left is part of the shot, it should have been removed - I can't tell what it is. Otherwise, I like the framing done by the window and plants, but I would kind of like to see what the cat is looking at. If there was a bird or something in the shot I think it would make a little more sense.

lunch is out there
by loudzgamer

Comment by e301:
Has the oddest quality of being a scan - it just doesn't feel like a digital photograph. Or maybe I'm seeing some other quality.

lunch is out there
by loudzgamer

Comment by ximending:
Why isn't the cat in focus or more out of focus?

lunch is out there
by loudzgamer

Comment by ajschmidt:
FOCUS

Angels Garden
by loudzgamer

Comment by spydr:
would be better w/out the building in the background.

Angels Garden
by loudzgamer

Comment by emorgan49:
aack - tilted horison - straighten it and your score wiil improve - it is unsettling to the viewer to be on a slant/

Angels Garden
by loudzgamer

Comment by willem:
the building in the background, the pavement in front, both could have been avoided and as such make the image better. One step closer, a lower viewpoint, concentrating on the water, rock and plants would have done it.