Waiting pollinator
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

An appealing floral study that meets the challenge.

Your focus is clearly on the flower and your DOF is appropriate and the off-centre composition works well. I see one of your commenters has remarked about over-exposure, persoanlly I think you have taken it just about as far as is acceptable but by doing so you have got better whites with little or no loss of detail, which for me is fine. You do have some chromatic aberration on the white petal, there is green/blue fringe all round the edge, this ought to be rectified in ACR

Please forgive the long delay in this critique, I hope you feel the image and critique are both still relevant, Sid.

December park
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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An appealing image that meets the challenge.

I love the high contrast you have here, some lovely whites, even though I think you have probably taken them a little too far there is a significant loss of detail but this, I think, is one of those rare occasions where it works to your advantage. I particularly love the foreground tree with its stark contrasts and the hint of red leaves against the near mono totality of the rest of the image.

Your composition is good with the foreground tree on the left and the back of the benches breaking up the whites. The DOF is also appropriate, there is no obvious evidence of camera shake from the slow shutter speed but there is a uniform softness that adds to the overall appeal.

I like everything you've done here, its an excellent submission, well done Marcel, Sid

Tiny Bubble Gums
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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A very colourful image that meets the challenge.

I'll be honest I've never actually seen bubble gum like this but I've probably led a very sheltered life! You have certainly captured and eye-catching image that just shouts 'look at me'. The colours are very striking.

You have a good DOF through most of the image bit it is just a little soft at the top. I assume you have used a tripod, although you have a slow shutter speed there is no evidence of camera shake. The highlights are good though the yellows are close to blown they seem paler and the whites whiter, perhaps some -EC would have overcome that and saturated the rest of the colours more too.

An excellent entry, thanks Sid

Winter hike
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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An interesting shot that I am unsure it meets the challenge.

Well, I must admit, I am completely confused by the validity of your entry, perhaps as well it didn't win! I think to be successful in a challenge of this nature those that have the most obvious omissions are the ones most likely to succeed, or at least get most attention. So, it was well guessed by one of your commenters but I really enjoyed Yo_Spiff's comment, I hope he wasn't right!

So, let's talk about the image itself. It's a shame it wasn't virgin snow but I do like the backlighting and shadows and your crossed poles in the foreground, I also like the near silhouettes of the trees. I think there is potential here to give the image more impact through increased contrast by giving the snow more exposure to get it whiter and reducing exposure on the tree trunks to make the silhouettes, I think it could make for a more interesting result.

Anyway, your secret's safe with me! Tee hee, Sid

Hands playing Classical guitar
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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Congratulations for your high placing with this most appropriate image for the challenge.

Is this a self portrait Marcel? If so, you are a multi talented man, well done. This is an excellent image, your chosen aperture is creating a nice centre of focus on the playing hand, the composition is very good with a nice diagonal running through the image. I know you do concern yourself with composition and have asked for help in the past, have no fear, you most definitely got it right here Marcel, it works perfectly.

I like the lighting and the mono processing it works very well here. There is an argument for making the chords hand the centre of focus which I think would also work very well, but the argument is equally strong to do as you have done as this is the hand from which the sound emanates. The few minor blemishes on the front of the guitar would benefit from some processing attention but its certainly not a major issue.

Well done Marcel, this is an excellent entry in every respect, Sid

Frozen Light
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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An original image that meets the challenge well.

I like your concept it it fits the challenge very well and your composition is very good, well done. The angle of the light, the very slight cropping and its position within the frame are all ideal for the subject. I like the ice and the water on the bulb it works very well adding another intriguing element to the image.

What I am not so keen on is the background, I wish it were a more uniform white throughout it would give the image even more impact than it already has. Having said that there may well be people here who prefer it this way, that is just my personal preference.

I think you have done a great here Marcel, thoroughly deserving of your high score and placing, well done, Sid

Once upon a time....
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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A cute image but does not meet the challenge.

The concept is cute and very appealing having the two teddies reading the book together tugs at the heartstrings and makes you go into soft mode! However, the execution could have been better, I don't think the focus is soft as your commenter has observed but the problem is a lack of sharpness which is due to camera shake. It may be that you used a tripod, I don't know, but at these sort of speeds unless you use a remote release you will introduce camera shake as soon as you press the shutter release. A way round this if you don't have a remote is to use the camera's self timer.

Your exposure is good and I like the chosen aperture and focus point on the eyes, I like the way the book in the foreground is in soft focus enabling us to focus on the bears themselves.

A very appealing image Marcel, sorry it didn't score higher for you, Sid

Light reflection
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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An interesting take that meets the challenge well.

You have come up with an interesting concept to fulfil the challenge, your chosen scene adds further appeal. Your chosen aperture has created a shallow DOF and your focus is softly on the reflection which actually works quite well.

I do find the lamp itself which is in sharp focus rather bright and overpowering it dominates over the much more appealing lower half of the shot. I think a crop excluding the lamp would improve the shot a lot. I've just noticed one of your commenters remarks which seems to concur with what I have just said.

Thanks Marcel for an interesting approach to the challenge, Sid

Home Work Balcony
by clickodak

Comment by sidpixel:
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A good still life that fits the challenge well.

An interesting take on the challenge and an interesting composition. I like the focus on the spirit level bubble together with the hammer on the same focal plane at the other end of the image, it works well. I like the way the spirit level recedes into the background, though the background itself does have some distracting elements.

The exposure is good throughout I like the natural light and the way it is lighting the hammer in particular. I find the red within the spirit level aperture frustrating because I think it may well be a drill, in which case it adds to the story the image is telling but it is too out of focus to distinguish what it is, because of that it now becomes a distraction. As it stands an increase in DOF would also bring more of the distant background into sharper focus and therefore more distracting still so I think it would be better to place the drill, if thats what it is, in a more prominent position in the foreground.

Thanks for an interesting and worthy submission, Sid

Home Work Balcony
by clickodak

Comment by Lydia:
My top score.

Well done!