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08/23/2015 07:00:23 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A cute image but does not meet the challenge.
The concept is cute and very appealing having the two teddies reading the book together tugs at the heartstrings and makes you go into soft mode! However, the execution could have been better, I don't think the focus is soft as your commenter has observed but the problem is a lack of sharpness which is due to camera shake. It may be that you used a tripod, I don't know, but at these sort of speeds unless you use a remote release you will introduce camera shake as soon as you press the shutter release. A way round this if you don't have a remote is to use the camera's self timer.
Your exposure is good and I like the chosen aperture and focus point on the eyes, I like the way the book in the foreground is in soft focus enabling us to focus on the bears themselves.
A very appealing image Marcel, sorry it didn't score higher for you, Sid |
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01/11/2015 04:59:22 AM |
| Idea is great, but focus a little soft. |
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01/05/2015 10:46:51 AM |
| Cute set-up, but they are not made of lint. |
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