Lost Soul
by DefyTime

Comment by Donatien:
Good creepy shot! Some things that might improve the next attempt; model's stance looks too "Hey honey, does this look good?" - try arms alongside body, perhaps head hanging a bit, maybe a bit more passing by in profile?

Another thing goes for the model's exposure, although I'm not sure how you should accomplish this (perhaps post-fix in PS) - but the shining halo around her makes her look solid, reflecting a lot of light. A ghost, one guess, wouldn't? Otherwise, good work with the colors, making it look cold and lonely out there. A little less light around the feet for next shot too?

Hope you don't find me too complaining, I do find it an attractive shot.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by Sammie:
Interesting picture. The girls are almost in full silhouette but I'm not sure of the purpose of the big flower in the front of the picture. It become the main subject instead of the girls.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by TooCool:
I'm curious to see how this was lit. The flower looks like a flash fired, but the girls don't... not that I'm a lighting expert.
TC

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by Beastman:
This pic. sucks! It's not true silhouette and that flower is just too bright.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by sevenine0:
best pic for this subject ive seen so far good job !!

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by pitsaman:
Interesting,9

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by willem:
The red flower spoils it in my opinion.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by scottwilson:
The fact that the flower is lit from the front make this look very odd to me. That flower just looks out of place.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by justine:
Different shot. I think the flower is a bit too centered for my taste and I don't see that it really adds much. Creative just the same. Good luck.

Twins
by DefyTime

Comment by photom:
Does not need the Indian Paintbrush in the foreground - it detracts a lot. The upper bodies and hir is superb.