Good creepy shot! Some things that might improve the next attempt; model's stance looks too "Hey honey, does this look good?" - try arms alongside body, perhaps head hanging a bit, maybe a bit more passing by in profile?
Another thing goes for the model's exposure, although I'm not sure how you should accomplish this (perhaps post-fix in PS) - but the shining halo around her makes her look solid, reflecting a lot of light. A ghost, one guess, wouldn't? Otherwise, good work with the colors, making it look cold and lonely out there. A little less light around the feet for next shot too?
Hope you don't find me too complaining, I do find it an attractive shot. |