Construction delays postpon new highway
by DefyTime

Comment by melismatica:
I think you need a proofreader next time you submit. LOL!

This is a good effort. The subject has relevence and the headline is factual and to the point (one of the few I've come across so far). Unfortunately, the photo doesn't really make that much of an impact. A traffic jam, indicating the need for the new highway would add immediacy to the story. As it is, it doesn't look like the delayed construction is causing problems for anyone. A photo for a story like this should reveal some kind of conflict or tension and I'm just not seeing it here.

Construction delays postpon new highway
by DefyTime

Comment by Phileine:
a bit too much usm. composition of the fly-overs meeting each other in the middle is nice.

Construction delays postpon new highway
by DefyTime

Comment by jadin:
Great composition. Good lighting. Great Headline. 8

Construction delays postpon new highway
by DefyTime

Comment by aaronb532:
Work on your spelling and you'll have a winner! (don't worry i didn't take away points for it)
-postpone-

Pleasantville
by DefyTime

Comment by C-town driver:
Good title and subject. I like this picture because it really utilizes the desaturation with a purpose. I think the cropping could have been adjusted so the color storefront is more central in the framing. But still a nice shot nonetheless.

Pleasantville
by DefyTime

Comment by graphicfunk:
super creative spin. My choice.

Pleasantville
by DefyTime

Comment by joanns:
I love seeing these quaint small-town store fronts. I think your choice of saturation is right on.

Paper or Plastic
by DefyTime

Comment by bethany_marie_23:
VERY good!

Pleasantville
by DefyTime

Comment by Glacierwolf:
Nice try. Your crop is too tight to make it work really good - and - you deffinitly should have taken out the yellow road stripe. If the store is color - what are you trying to highlight with the stripe and shrubs still color too??

Pleasantville
by DefyTime

Comment by Lafaminit:
great shot