The Golden Wall
by tyt2000

Comment by justine:
Not an unattractive shot and it does show texture. I do like the yellow/gold color but think the bottom lighting is too over exposed. [fried] Good luck in the challenge.

The Golden Wall
by tyt2000

Comment by Brooklyn513:
Rotated your staircase I see. Good job. 8

Turn it up to Ten
by tyt2000

Comment by drgsoell:
Lots o black. Good to offset with some white. Not sure how crazy I am about the composition.

Turn it up to Ten
by tyt2000

Comment by dieselbiscuit:
Personally I think I would have cropped in a little tighter at the bottom.

Turn it up to Ten
by tyt2000

Comment by Spork99:
.........but these go to eleven................

Turn it up to Ten
by tyt2000

Comment by Arcy:
Nice :D The only distractions for me here are the following: the pickup selector switch on the right could have been either more in focus or more out of focus; but as it is it looks like it was just an unfortunate bystander between the two knobs. Also the background could have been a little bit whiter and perhaps more *consistently* white from side to side. Other than that, very cool photo!

Overlooking The Parted Tracks
by tyt2000

Comment by tyt2000:
Thanks to everyone for the great comments, I really appriciate it.

Message edited by author 2004-02-18 02:17:34.

Overlooking The Parted Tracks
by tyt2000

Comment by JC_Homola:
Very well done, my only criticism is the OE erea on the zipper pull. Creative and well executed. 9

Its Time for Peace
by tyt2000

Comment by amsmyth:
Greetings from the Critique Club:
This is a clever response and a fitting one for the challenge. My initial response was that it looked more like a shadow picture of a rabbit than a peace sign but that's unimportant, really. The watch face is too dark to really see the hands and the watch overall is out of focus or soft enough enough to be distracting. There are many good suggestions below for re-shooting this so that the watch appears to go around the wrist. Your concept was original and your underlying motive to be praised, the image is an interesting one.

Overlooking The Parted Tracks
by tyt2000

Comment by Mona:
Great