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JasComment by szalona: pleased to see this is refreshing to see something like this coming from you, though youre still sticking alot to the whole water, water droplets, water here, water there. it would be nice to see you experiment with other elements a bit, like the "exilir of jealousy" with smoke, that was interesting and you have good potential playing with it. Dont stick to water just because you know you can photograph it well, dare to try (and fail if you must on the way); in the end it will only broaden your capacities.
PERTAINING MORE DIRECTLY TO THIS PHOTO, i must say here at least you used water
a bit differently than you have before (ie. couple drops sitting all over the place but god knows why, a splash here, a spash there but with no clear motive or hint as to what youre trying to expess with it) so its really interesting, even though this is a sort of splash, the water's movement and the photo composition really
make the photo's particularity.
Moreover, i like how the title adds to the photo, gives it more meaning than it would have perhaps without it. The power of a title is allmighty after all. it can make or break a photo (to a certain extent)
Im not gonna go through the obvious "oh how sharp the drop are" because its obvious, so moving on.
I like the fact that there is a division in the middle of your background, it balances the composition somehow (though i dont know if chosing green was the best idea, perhaps so). i dont know what it would have looked like had you used anything else, but its just that the green background seems to take away from the bottom flower and as such is distracting. but definitly the idea to have made a seperation in the first place, i like. perhaps its just something to play around with until its perfect perfect perfect ! (thats a lie, there is actually no such thing)
Finally, before i wish you luck and that you experiment more in further photos, one thing that kind of bothered me is this harsh reflexion of the light off the stem of the top flower. some smoothening perhaps would have not distracted the eye to such frivolty but rather keep it focused on the main "happening" area, the focus of the photo. Unless theres a major underlying reason for that and i am totally off in which case i hope you develop on it in photographers comments ;)
Good luck and i wish you to experiment further in your next photos
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