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09/07/2006 10:06:42 PM |
| Very nice but I keep tilting my head to level the horizon LOL. |
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09/07/2006 02:31:40 PM |
| wonderful shot. love the rich color. |
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09/07/2006 11:39:00 AM |
| The horizontal slant is disconcerting. The colors are quite vivid, actually may be a bit oversaturated. This image could be stronger also with a shift in composition by cropping about 25% off the left side and some off the bottom as well to get the subject off-center. |
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09/06/2006 10:27:51 AM |
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09/05/2006 06:55:04 PM |
| horizon should be straightened |
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09/05/2006 10:39:23 AM |
| Nothing to say but wow... |
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09/04/2006 11:41:44 PM |
Technical: love the lighting, contrast and coloring...
Creativity: i wish she wasn't so centered...but the way you capture the light only there!!!! awesome
Score: 10 and adding to faves! |
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09/04/2006 02:55:52 AM |
| Very dramatic composition, lighting and colors. I like it. |
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09/03/2006 07:38:35 PM |
| great colors. tilted but i kinda liek it that way.8 |
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09/03/2006 06:55:19 PM |
-GORGEOUS SETTING!!
-Beautiful colors!
-Horizon is tilted
-I would have definitely cropped this tighter... from shadow on the rock, up and to the right... placing her in a perfect rule of thirds position
-I want to contemplate in a place like that :) :)
-Score: 7 |
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09/03/2006 05:26:25 PM |
| You have done some good work here, trying to work out if you deliberatley slanted the horizon,making all roads lead to your subject....7 |
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09/03/2006 03:09:52 PM |
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09/02/2006 08:09:24 PM |
| The spotlight on the thinker makes this photo work. I like the way the lines intersect at the point of the person. |
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09/02/2006 03:00:14 PM |
| The dramatic lighting and the sky make this a very nice shot. I am one of those, though, that likes horizons to be level so the water doesn't run out of the sea. |
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09/02/2006 08:35:12 AM |
Composition: 6 - I think cutting a little off the bottom and left would improve the composition.
Technical: 6 - The shadowy area at the bottom seems a bit dull, but the rest is nice and vibrant and contrasty, if a little soft.
Creativity: 7 - The tilt works well to add a unique perspective, but I think even more of a tilt would look better, to stop it looking like it could be an accident.
Appeal: 6 - A nice photo to look at that holds my interest for a while.
Overall Calculated Average Score: 6 |
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09/02/2006 02:12:17 AM |
| Great leading lines everywhere, taking me in to the subject. Careful about the titled horizon, though. |
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09/02/2006 01:20:06 AM |
| I'm not a crooked horizon nazi, but it really does not work in this image. |
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09/02/2006 12:31:24 AM |
| Beautiful work. Love the colour, lines and subject. Tilted horizon by choice? I suspect so, and I personally don't think it harms the composition, but you may have some other die-hard crits tell you different - 10 |
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09/01/2006 06:36:38 PM |
| It's clever that the figure almost looks to be part of the rock. I think having such a crooked horizon will hurt your score somewhat. |
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09/01/2006 04:08:46 PM |
GREAT VIEW AND COLORS.
The horizon looks tilted, yet it seems to add to the composition.
I would like to have seen the person a little more clearly.
had it not been for the title I could easily have skipped by and missed the contemplator. |
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09/01/2006 01:41:44 PM |
| Jeeeez. . .what gorgeous lighting. I love photos like this that show scale and perspective by having a tiny little person in it. One of the great ones here for sure! |
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09/01/2006 12:03:52 PM |
| The lines of the rock and water line are distracting. Good work to get details in shadows. |
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09/01/2006 10:56:23 AM |
| awesome light and shade...wonderful colour, hope you do well with this 8 |
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09/01/2006 09:12:48 AM |
| Great composition. Alone on the barren rock surrounded by the vast and open sea sits a man curled up in contemplation. Yes, I get the sense that he is very alone with his thoughts because in the composition he is small to his surroundings. While that composition choice plays as a strength to creating the mood it also is a weakness. I think that you could have cropped another 20% of the image and captured the same mood. And, the advantage would be that it would have called greater attention to the figure sitting on the rocks - he is a little too lost in his surroundings. The colors are a tad too surreal - the purple & blue hues in the sky and the sea appear to vivid, too unnatural in that they almost take on a supernatural effect. |
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09/01/2006 04:44:25 AM |
| Great composition and the light is fantastic, but... imo I would have had the model standing or in a different outfit, at first glance she looks like another rock - maybe just me (6) |
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09/01/2006 01:22:40 AM |
| Wide angle croping the bottom wouldhave mede it perfect. Great pic! |
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09/01/2006 12:31:14 AM |
| I have a personal weakness in the form of intolerance for tilted horizons. To me, they give the impression of sloppiness. Sometimes a horizon tilted purposefully will improve a photo. In this case I don't think it does and it's tilted to a minor degree so that I can't tell if it's on purpose, or an error. Otherwise it is a well composed and executed photo. Great color. Gives a sense of drama. |
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