Could you get that for me?
by Albertmdh

Comment by EL-ROI:
move your subjects away from the background.

Could you get that for me?
by Albertmdh

Comment by lizbeth010:
its really really white and too bright.

Could you get that for me?
by Albertmdh

Comment by coolhar:
would be better with a background

Could you get that for me?
by Albertmdh

Comment by nordic:
white pen on white background doesn't work for me, focus could be sharper

Could you get that for me?
by Albertmdh

Comment by GoodEnd:
This remember my old Cannon Prima Quick a P&S film camera. Use the light to add to the image, not to blow it.

Looking Across the Bridge
by Albertmdh

Comment by GinaRothfels:
Nice idea, but I find the background too cluttered on the left side.

Looking Across the Bridge
by Albertmdh

Comment by GoodEnd:
The guitar state says all the truth... I can´t enumerate the points that need some workaround. Starting with composition , walking to light, paasing over the focus. You take a slash picture. The idea itself is good. May be you can put the camera a bit far away from guitar to improve the usage of hiperfocal distance, this will help you to focus the botton of picture. The light... some can be placed under the gitar to enhace it´s silhuete. If you had used flash ligth, try to difuse it with some piece of toallete paper to avoide de overexposure in captors.

Looking Across the Bridge
by Albertmdh

Comment by reevey:
Background is very distracting, and I'd like to see a bit more of the guitar by tilting the head a bit more towards the camera. Good attempt, there's a few of these about!

Looking Across the Bridge
by Albertmdh

Comment by Mike King:
This is a cool idea. I like how it's not immediately apparent what we're viewing. I wish table to the left was cropped somehow and maybe switch to black and white, or make the colors more interesting, but it's interesting to look at.

Looking Across the Bridge
by Albertmdh

Comment by space amoeba:
Would have been nicer with more DOF.