Ordinary Peopleby
garlicComment by Philos: Critique Club Comment:
Hi there,
When I clicked the CC button and your image came up, the first thing I thought was âWOWâ great black and whites.
B&W still gives me problems, so I am always a bit envious about good black and whites.
The picture makes a good first impression, but by studying it a bit more there are some things that could be improved.
As stated somewhere the light on the faces, especially on your sisters face is a bit too much, and takes away some of the detail in her face. It also makes the faces look âhardâ because of the stronger shadows on the other side of the face.
There is another thing that I noticed, it looks to me like there is a halo around the heads of the 2 guyâs at the left. It could be me, but it looks like somethingâs there.
There where some remarks about cropping, well I see another tree at the left side, and I would have wanted that more in the frame, then you could frame the photo with the two trees on the side, but it is always easy to make remarks after a picture has been taken.
I think you did a good job, I really like the Photo.
Keep up the good work.
Peter
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