Are You My Mommy?by
JakeKurdsjukComment by sfalice: Greetings from the Critique Club
Well,
backdoorhippie, "back at ya."
Now it's my turn to critique one of yours!
Going strictly on what you show in the image and your title, whoa: "way too busy" "what's the subject?"
Those are the first questions that come to mind. Then, hey, what a strange mask; a dog's face would fit
in one of those. If I was voting I'd just go with the first 2 observations and keep going.
But looking at it in a critiquing mode - especially with your explanation, I'd just say that you had a great
story to tell, but the story needed to be distilled down to its essentials. There is so much information
in there, the super story was lost. (IMO of course)
Thank you for this image. I did wonder, upon occasion, how the dogs were protected, or even if they were
protected.
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