TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by r_vesper:
Nice concept. I would have liked it a little more if the focused one was not dead center. the color scheme is nice.

TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by britteyboo:
nice image

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by lectrol

Comment by kyebosh:
I'm guessing you were going for somebody half asleep... i'm guessing both you and the subject WERE half asleep! I like the focus, it's good, one thing you might want to change is the coloration. It's pretty orangish, and i'd like to see some more natural hues.

coming back to look at this one now i see major pixilation in the eye. Not sure why really... perhaps it was caused by the sharpening?

Message edited by author 2006-01-07 11:37:08.

TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by batmaing:
Ticonderogas! Best pencils ever! Great composition, great DOF, great colors!

TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by melismatica:
A good idea but a more thoughtful arrangement of the pencils would make a better composition. This seems rather haphazard. There is a distracting shadow behind the pencil on the far left of the frame.

TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by UNTITLED:
Who would of thought that No. 2's would make for such a great photograph. My tiny and stupid nitpick is the one pencil being directly behind the front most pencil.

TICONDEROGA
by lectrol

Comment by theSaj:
Touch lack of detail on the center pencil (too much highlight) but otherwise good.

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by lectrol

Comment by petea:
good, but grainy

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by lectrol

Comment by Hendry Jacoby:
An especially nice macro shot when considred in conjuncture with the title and the challenge. The half awake eye is a compelling subject. Very nice and crisp image. 9

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by lectrol

Comment by itsgodswork:
the eyes are not wide enough... your camera consentrated too much on the eyebro's theres no composition and your photograph doesnt say much about what the challenge asked for