pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by jmsetzler:
I think your cnoice of subject is good for this challenge... I think you possibly could have uncovered a different perspective on this photo to give it some more punch. The lighting isn't quite even across the frame from left to right.. it gets darker as we move from one side to the other... - jmsetzler

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by lolly_gagger:
would have been a better example of juxtaposition if it were taken from a different angle and if the background weren't wrinkled

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by axalot:
To much contrast in light

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by kathleenm:
Oh no, wrinkles! ;-) Not enough to hold my interest, perhaps a different composition would help.

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by RedRuthann:
Idea is good. I'm going to be frank: Not sharp enough/or too pixelated; I don't like seeing the black cloth and the wrinkles; the setup does not do anything - What I see: a black cloth with 2 cameras placed side by side, taken with a camera with the flash on. I think the idea is there, but the lighting and exposure needs improvement - when using a backdrop - especially black, you need to have the exposure just right as to not see it in the photo. I think the arrangement of the cameras needs to be changed - perhaps at angles.
Overall, I'm sorry to say, but this photo is poor - but I think that with some more practice and continued participation here at dpc, skills will improve.
Ruthann - 2

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by malapropam:
Nice idead...but you lost me with the dark background.

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by Konador:
nice idea, but I think you could have experimented more with different angles and lighting conditions to make this more interesting. It is also a very pixelated image.

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by Kathyc:
Composition seems awkward. A more irregular arrangement might have been effective--also a lighter background would have provided more contrast.

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by focus:
There are people on this website that do not have cameras, but just like looking at pictures. You and I as photography enthusiasts readily know the camera on the left is "old." But would those without a background know this? Really, the Canon doesn't show any aging. It "looks" new.

pre-digital
by queen 91

Comment by prodigal havoc:
The photo is not as sharp as it could be.