"Please Sir, I want some more"
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Comment by jayzundel:
I like this

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Comment by tnun:
I like the idea of interpreting this literally and abstractly at the same time. But I must confess I am bothered by what looks like a nice teak salad bowl - at once too specific to be abstract, too large and inappropriate to be authentic. Everything counts in a picture, and is more easily counted in a minimal one. 5

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Comment by daisydavid:
An odd look, I feel I want to turn it upside down for some strange reason. The low key approach is ok, but the emptiness above the bowl leaves me feeling just that, not as an effect of the topic, but there is something lacking in the composition. Probably, because they are a man's hands you were without a boyish model, a low key face would have completed the picture for me.5.

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Comment by vawendy:
Nice idea, and nice bowl, but I'm feeling that it's too dark. Perhaps it's the heavy shadows between the fingers -- because I like the idea of the back of the bowl and the person disappearing. -6-

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Comment by posthumous:
The photo is too dark and contrived for my taste. The large area of black on top just makes it seem like you ran out of props and costumes. In general, I think if your photo is going to be largely black, it feels contrived to have one portion be well lit and the rest completely invisible. 2

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Comment by Denielle:
I like what you've chosen to do with this shot... but I feel it's just too dark.
Gave it a 5

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Comment by lunachicken:
A good idea, but the plastic bowl and well groomed hands don't tie to the story well. Would like to see more subject, in a way that lends to the story. I can faintly see burn lines around the hands and forearms as well, but that may be this monitor so take that with a grain of salt. 3

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Comment by Tiny:
Too dark,hackneyed poor image.2.

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Comment by mariuca:
Dickens-iana , only that the bowl had to be made of metal and the hands of a young boy and not so delicate and clean!
Nevertheless, a nice image - a square crop might be even better
7

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Comment by Garry:
Yup, you nailed it. Lovely take on the book, and so PERFECTLY executed with your choice of light and minimal subject in focus/view. Very sparse and poignant!