Transparent At Sunset
by notonline

Comment by Sherri1209:
Third stop and I have gone back and forth on how to rate this shot. It is one of those love it or leave it shots IMO....I personally love it. Great Job. 9

Transparent At Sunset
by notonline

Comment by Gallatin:
beautiful

Transparent At Sunset
by notonline

Comment by jasonarm:
very nice

Transparent At Sunset
by notonline

Comment by parrothead:
Very artistic look and all around a nice shot! 8

Transparent At Sunset
by notonline

Comment by marmalade1121:
Cool paper (?!) art. Interesting.

Train
by notonline

Comment by Nald:
notonline:

I gave this an 8 while voting was on. Why? First I felt it fit the challenge (seems to be harder to do for some) and I liked how clean the shot looked. I feel the train is well represented and the surroundings are unique. I think having the road in this shot actually helps it, the train and road are following the same path. The freeway / parking lights in the upper left are a bit distracting but not too bad IMO. Good job, hope to see more from you in the future!

Train
by notonline

Comment by JeremyFleury:
I like this photo. It is very nicely done. In the thread where you asked if people saw the train, I think that some may have not. I am by far not a expert, but just looking at this picture, my eyes drift to the brightly light road. I wonder what the shot would look like if the road was cropped out. Then the lines would lead me to the train.

Train
by notonline

Comment by RonBeam:

Originally posted by Alienyst: Thought there were way too many distractions in the shot. Saw the train as a divider between the chaos of the top left and the serenity of the lower right instead of the subject as the title suggests. More train and less surrounding area would have been better.

The lesson to be learned here is that lines and their placement mean something in a photograph. This is why composition and prevision are so vital to the move beyond technically correct photography.

Train
by notonline

Comment by CEJ:
Thought there were way too many distractions in the shot. Saw the train as a divider between the chaos of the top left and the serenity of the lower right instead of the subject as the title suggests. More train and less surrounding area would have been better.

Train
by notonline

Comment by rex:
To explain my 8 is that there is a lot to see in this photo, perhaps too much. The few things that bother me are all the lights at top and the one sign showing through the trees on the left. If you had a star filter and used it then it would improve the shot drastically. It also looks as you were on a bridge. I think if possible it would have been better at a lower POV just to block out all those lights in the background.

Edit: for getting the left and right crossed. sorry

Message edited by author 2005-08-09 10:49:32.