Color Split
by frumoaznicul

Comment by gerdagrice:
Great idea. Just a bit too much negative space, though.

Distractions
by frumoaznicul

Comment by ddmckinney1954:
like your dof

Distractions
by frumoaznicul

Comment by JoelHSmith:
Doesn't really fit the challenge... it is a nice pic.

Color Split
by frumoaznicul

Comment by admart01:
the dirty yellow color really works for me -- your use of negative space gives this an edge. One of my ribbon picks this challange

Color Split
by frumoaznicul

Comment by Tallbloke:
Nice image , I really like this one.

Color Split
by frumoaznicul

Comment by justine:
I like the desaturation affect but this just looks a bit flat. I'm not sure I can say why..? the shot is okay. Good luck in the challenge.

Color Split
by frumoaznicul

Comment by Wildpurple:
10.

Distractions
by frumoaznicul

Comment by wkoffel:
How is this an unusual viewpoint? I do think it's a beautiful photo, however.

Last Train Home
by frumoaznicul

Comment by Neuferland:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Wow, what can I say that hasn't been said already? I loved this shot during the challenge, you told an entire story with one picture. Truly one of those "pictures" that's worth a 1,000 words.

The only imporvements that I could see happening are from, like you said, advanced editing. Bring out the sky more, clone out the pole on the right side that is going out of the picture, it's very distracting and bring down the contrast just a tad, a very small tad and you have a great shot here ready to sell!

I loved your recent candids also, keep up the great work!

Good Luck In Future Challenges!

Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further!

Heaven Dance
by frumoaznicul

Comment by mirdonamy:
Very nice star effect. I like the blue too. I think the center (light / sun) should not be so blueish though.