The Library
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Comment by fluxn:
nice composition on this one.

Apartments
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Comment by superdave_909:
Portrait instead of landscape? I like this but the office building seems distracting

Apartments
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Comment by leaf:
really nice repetition. I really like how the fun building on the right compares to the very static boring building on the left. The first building is not super sharp which is diasspointing but still nice.

Apartments
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Comment by geewhy:
Good use of composition makes this a strong image.

Apartments
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Comment by TommyMoe21:
Chicago, Chicago!!!

The Library
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Comment by Katspetkat:
That couch reminds me of the huge cushy chairs in our library. I want to go there now and just take a nap. Bad idea with a test coming up. Looks quiet indeed.

The Library
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Comment by guybrowme:
Nice thought, not such a nice pic. Sort of boring.

The Library
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Comment by Lenice:
The big wall int he middle takes away from teh photo.

No Hidden Agenda
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Comment by banmorn:
Perhaps, but your agenda is a bit too hidden by darkness.

Day-to-day HIV/AIDS Pharmacopoeia
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Comment by cbeller:
**Critique Club**

Hi Ken -

Positives:
Good take on the challenge. I also like the angle of your shot and the way you filled the frame.

Possible Improvements:
I really think the B&W takes away from the impact of this shot. Your lighting is also a bit harsh. There are a few white spots that are blown out and the shadows in the bottles are distractive. I think a diffuser of some sort, and lighting from a higher angle would have helped.

I hope you found this critique useful. I look forward to seeing your future entries.

Regards,
Chris