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| 04/29/2004 06:40:25 AM |
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| 04/28/2004 06:17:57 PM |
Dreaming of a Well-Proportioned Bodyby flip89Comment by melismatica: I like what you were attempting here. The man is definitely has a look of longing or adoration on his face. Unfortuantely, the ice sculpture and the loudspeaker smack dab in the center are hard to overlook. Not a lot you can do about that except perhaps move a little to the right and take the shot at a slight angle. At least then the two distractions wouldn't completelly overlap as they are now. Lowering the viewpoint a couple of inches to include more of the audience would have helped. As they are now, they are distracting blury details (particularly the bald head). Including a bit more of them would have made a nice contrast with the man who is facing the opposite direction but also has his eyes fixed on the model. Lowering the viewpoint and cropping that inch of space above the model's head would have put him on an even higher plane than the audience and reduced that large chunk of blue in the upper right to a less important chunk of blue. High marks because I like the moment you captured in the man's expression. |
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| 04/28/2004 05:47:07 PM |
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| 04/28/2004 11:08:32 AM |
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| 04/28/2004 09:17:18 AM |
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| 04/28/2004 01:42:23 AM |
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| 04/27/2004 05:10:52 PM |
On A Clear Day ... You Can See Foreverby flip89Comment by photom: Great perspective - exposure. The only minor comment I'd make is that since that sky is so bright at the very top, attracting attention, I'd just take it out all together. Your image is superb without it. It's so minot that I'm not taking away any points however. Very nice job. |
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| 04/27/2004 04:59:55 PM |
On A Clear Day ... You Can See Foreverby flip89Comment by autool: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 10
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 10
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 9
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 10 Autool
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