Lost Childhood
by Neuferland

Comment by hallswel:
Challenge centered ΓΆ€“ 10
Creative ΓΆ€“ 8
Appeal (is it interesting?) ΓΆ€“ 6
Technical -8

score 8

Lost Childhood
by Neuferland

Comment by Pidd:
Unfortunately, although your shot fits the challenge , I don't think it is one that benefits from the "centered subject" theme. My feeling is that the purpose of the challenge is to find a subject that feels better centered than if you were to offset it. With this picture, although the focus is good and the bright color of the grass is appealing, the stroller, especially coupled with your title, does not give me the sense of Lost Childhood as well as if it were the more typical "rule of thirds" composition.

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by bongo:
Greater depth of field required to keep both subjects in focus

My First Barn
by Neuferland

Comment by darcy:
FYI - just because it was your first, doesn't make it new. and despite that, the challenge was supposed to be about photographing something for the first time. somehow i doubt this was the first shot you took of your own barn. but i'm not docking points, just sayin'

My First Barn
by Neuferland

Comment by banmorn:
very nice in sepia...this angle is OK but I would have move just a bit more to either side and pulled back just a little so that the right side of the barn does not seem so crowed in the frame.

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by Count:
Cute shot, nice pic. I like candid family shots like this...

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by fstopopen:
watch your reflections

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by Sweetheart02:
it would be better if both of the subjects of the picture were in focus.

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by Rando D300:
good take on the challenge, too bad about the focus on the young one

Young and Old
by Neuferland

Comment by bigjvoltage:
cute candid-7