What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by bramscolnick:
this looks like someone's vacation shot.. sorta dull.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by Swashbuckler:
Almost great! Is this an advertisement for EPSI? Good thing the logo is recognizable! Also, turn your subject 20 degrees into the sun. Let's see her whole face.
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What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by lecook:
for me, there's no appeal, the pepsi looks warm on a hot summer day ...but if she was sitting on the rocks or the rise and facing the sun without those awful shadows on her face (and wearing sunglasses) with a cool breeze blowing thru her hair, thoroughly enjoying her solitary moment with the pepsi...that would be different, because i'd wish it was me!

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by justine:
Humm, we read her tshirt and can't see the bottle clearly.
Shot is somewhat dark, her pretty face is hidden. Top needs some crop.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by Remie:
I don't think the picture is focused enough on the bottle of Pepsi to make it an advertisement.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by langdon:
Poorly lit -- you should have had her turn to the right so that the sun was more-so on her. The Pepsi itself is too small to really portray your meaning. This seems like a snapshot.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by jeffw:
Use fill flash to eliminate shadows on the subject.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by iban:
product name isn't even showing very well.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by zerplord:
What are we talking about here, the pepsi or the girl holding the pepsi?

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment by BAMartin:
You needed to make a product a little more prominent in the photograph. You are trying to sell the Pepsi, not the girl.