Dirty Pond Crisis (A documentary on the effects of water pollution on fish)
by Kelli

Comment by kirsty_mcn:
I noticed this in the challenge, and it was certainly not a title I'd considered lol. It was a good idea to pursue something for an environmental documentary, but I feel this topic is just a little bland - I'd certainly fall asleep during the movie if you don't mind me saying.

All the technical things are ok, don't have anything to criticise with the composition, but it just lacks emotional appeal. Shouldn't have got the brown, but don't wanna take your ribbon from you :P

A little bumpy, a little slimy and lots of fuzzy fur
by Kelli

Comment by TNCameron:
I think a tighter crop would have done loads for this picture

Looking through the mirror...
by Kelli

Comment by MTPixels:
Well done! Great job on the lighting. The skin tones seem to be right on.

Looking through the mirror...
by Kelli

Comment by GuGi:
Got carried away with the contrast or.....

Looking through the mirror...
by Kelli

Comment by tnichol:
great idea, don't get whats going on with the stylist's eyes..

Looking through the mirror...
by Kelli

Comment by BakerBug:
This picture looks slightly blured. A little faster shutter speed may help with this.

Potted
by Kelli

Comment by raish:
This does not meet the challenge - inanimate but not an arranged composition.

Looking through the mirror...
by Kelli

Comment by pidge:
The idea and composition of this picture are great, but it is lacking on the technical side. The focus on the models is a bit soft, and I'm not sure if it's Neat Image or Gaussian blur, but there seems to be a too heavy dose of that applied as well. It also has a slightly yellowish cast to it that can be fixed with a light touch of post processing

Dirty Pond Crisis (A documentary on the effects of water pollution on fish)
by Kelli

Comment by DanSig:
[[trading post]]

that's just cruel.. the owner of that pond should be forced to drink some of that water ;)

the composition isn't very good, the fish in focus is to close to the center of the image, it's very dirty and uninteresting and lacks that punch that makes it something to look at.

Let sleeping bears lie...or else!
by Kelli

Comment by DanSig:
[[trading post]]

composition is good, the subject is pissed off, and overall a nice image.. exept for that blown out stripe that is behind the bear, it's really bad for the picture...