They typed crooked in 1964
by Kelli

Comment by Melethia:
A couple of interesting things this picture tells me - the most significant of which is that I didn't know it took nearly a year for the commission to submit their final report. In my dealings with the government, that's actually not bad! I with the "I like the pencil" gang on this one - adds a dimension that would be lacking without it.

"Mom, can I play in your light tent?"
by Kelli

Comment by Nuzzer:
Maybe its my monitor but the red seems a bit bright to me.

"Mom, can I play in your light tent?"
by Kelli

Comment by Caltrop:
I'm not sure i get this one.

"Mom, can I play in your light tent?"
by Kelli

Comment by skylercall:
I love your title! The picture looks too soft though.

Pale Ale
by Kelli

Comment by glad2badad:
Right concept with a nice subject. Somehow, not much seems in focus. Maybe because it's all muted a bit (sorry, not sure how else to describe it). Could be the condensation on the glass and glare from the lighting around the top (area without condensation)? The background seems more yellow than white (really evident from the thumbnail view). I like the composition with the off-centering and upper-right placement of the glass. Good luck in the challenge.

Pale Ale
by Kelli

Comment by JuliBoc:
Too pale

They typed crooked in 1964
by Kelli

Comment by JunieMoon:
Not a very interesting piece, though the signatures are very well focused.

Pale Ale
by Kelli

Comment by fotojunkie:
I know the overexposed look was probably intentional for the light on white feel, but it really appears like an over exposed shot and I lose focus of whats going on and only see the beer. I might have used more contrast and aimed the light through the beer onto the surface giving "Light on White".

2 / 3 Creativity - Ordinary/Common = 0.
2 / 3 Subject - Subject follow the challenge theme?
1 / 2 Technical - Focus, lighting, etc.
0 / 2 WOW - The hard to get points.
5 /10 Score - I rarely give out 9's & 10's.

Pale Ale
by Kelli

Comment by justine:
Over all this is a bit too washed out and doesn't appear to be in focus.

Pale Ale
by Kelli

Comment by Pegasus:
Too bright - it's made the image too washed out for my taste