Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by lsmart:
Excellent, cute. Very professional.I love the light composition. The child expression is natural and deep. Great job. I am impressed.

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by bob_bobski:
IMO i think it would have looked nicer with the child in the left hand window. 7

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by sonnyh:
Nicely done! Send that kid to camp. lol!

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by love:
his expression is wonderful...

Claudia
by aKiwi

Comment by e301:
from the Critique Club

You must read this with the understanding that I neither understand nor appreciate the art of the 'studio portrait' in any sense ...

She looks shockingly like an old girlfriend of mine - now, that's scary enough in tis own right. I've no idea what's supposed to be wrong with this shot - usually those that score in this range have a few obvious drawbacks, but here - well, it seems an honest, accurate, relaxed, even perceptive representation to me. What's to criticise, or for that matter critique? There's an amusement about this face, a sense of wit and alertness that I find quite approachable - but that's about the model rather than the photograph - and as a photograph it's just a technicaly assured piece of competence - but then, in what sense is not all studio portraiture exactly that? I think you did a good job with the lighting - but I was once a lighting designer, and all that stuff seems second nature to me, and therefore by definition not praiseworthy: because oit serves a purpose, and is not an end in itself.

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by hotpasta:
excellent shot...this is fantastic...hope it does well for you. It's one of those shots that gets votes...well executed, I can't really fault it

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by hanneke:
nice use of the window frame, the fact the boy's at the right side looking out of the photo is surprising good. might have a bit more contrast. 8

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Comment by yanko:
Well shot. However, I'm not sure I like the white background and all that empty space framed. Shooting just that one square with the boy in it would have worked better for me. Anyway, just my opinion. Good luck!

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by mpeters:
White BG? Idnic? Nice picture with excellent lighting and detail. 9

Bored and waiting for summer.
by aKiwi

Comment by C-town driver:
Nice composition and use of white here.... 7