Passed down
by LonnieD

Comment by Luci11e:
this is a good family album image - in order to make it better I would think all the bigger kids should be looking at the little boy with the heirloom toy. I also think a better image could have been achieved had the photographer been on their knees, more on the kids level, and to put more of the attention on the toy to have shot in front of the toy (which would actually be behind the toy in this case).

Passed down
by LonnieD

Comment by HarveyG:
Cute story. I'd like to have gotten Jr in the Jeep and the others looking at the camera for more impact.

Passed down
by LonnieD

Comment by JokersSoul:
The sun is a bit harsh on the faces. The older boy is squinting. I love the old car and the little one.

Lines of light
by LonnieD

Comment by Kimmymac:
I like the lines, but I wasn't sure what it was at first until I looked at the comments you made about the picture. It is a cool shot!

Beach Dancer
by LonnieD

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the shooting into the sun has left you between a silhouette and a detail shot.

Technically this is close to being good. The shutter speed may have been a little long as the waves show. I'm not sure if you were trying for a silhouette or to have detail in the girl but this shot is in between the two. I think this would have been better as a portrait or sqare crop leaving some of the space at the right out of the frame. A little more contrast/levels wouldn't have gone astray either.

Artistically this is great. The girls pose mid dance is nice, the colours are good.

In summary this has great potential, keep shooting and submitting!

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Lines of light
by LonnieD

Comment by Luci11e:
this photo just doesn't do it for me despite the obvious lines

Lines of light
by LonnieD

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Cool abstract. I look forward to finding out what this is.

Beach Dancer
by LonnieD

Comment by e10icus:
Nice. Like the Golden tones.

Beach Dancer
by LonnieD

Comment by Crafty:
Nice image

Beach Dancer
by LonnieD

Comment by Catherine_B:
Very precious!