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Beach Dancer
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Challenge: Dance (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 ED
Location: Melkbosstrand, Cape Town, South Africa
Date: Feb 18, 2010
Aperture: f 16
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Candid, Children
Date Uploaded: Feb 23, 2010

Just having fun as the sun was going down.....

Editting -
Tweaking in Camera RAW
Open in PS
Duplication
Exposure
Hue/Sat
Levels
Cloning dust spots
Sharpen
Resize

Statistics
Place: 29 out of 55
Avg (all users): 5.3684
Avg (commenters): 6.5714
Avg (participants): 4.8966
Avg (non-participants): 5.4219
Views since voting: 777
Views during voting: 446
Votes: 285
Comments: 8
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03/04/2010 04:54:25 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the shooting into the sun has left you between a silhouette and a detail shot.

Technically this is close to being good. The shutter speed may have been a little long as the waves show. I'm not sure if you were trying for a silhouette or to have detail in the girl but this shot is in between the two. I think this would have been better as a portrait or sqare crop leaving some of the space at the right out of the frame. A little more contrast/levels wouldn't have gone astray either.

Artistically this is great. The girls pose mid dance is nice, the colours are good.

In summary this has great potential, keep shooting and submitting!

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/26/2010 07:36:32 PM
Nice. Like the Golden tones.
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02/26/2010 07:32:18 PM
Nice image
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02/26/2010 11:16:11 AM
Very precious!
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02/26/2010 07:20:29 AM
Figure a bit too lost in the waves
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02/24/2010 08:39:40 PM
this picture has an overall nice feel to it. i would have preferred more contrast to further accentuate the silhouette created by the dancer. 7
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02/24/2010 07:41:59 PM
So cute. She looks like she is having fun. I like the time of day for the shot too. She is a bit out of focus. Not sure if that is what you were going for. Lovely anyway.
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02/24/2010 02:30:41 PM
wonderful capture of childhood dance :-) good job
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