I Need Brother :(
by moayad_habas

Comment by Melethia:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

A lovely conversion to B&W and a very pensive photograph of the young man. You've captured the emotion well here. Good detail and pretty good light with the exception of the eyes, as some of your commenters have noted. Not sure how you could have added more light to his eyes - the pop-up camera flash as fill, perhaps, but that sometimes can look "fake". I think it can be adjusted to just add a minimum of light - perhaps that is something you might wish to learn about the camera and try at another time. Meanwhile, I think this is quite nice - very thoughtful and a quite nice "in the moment" type of shot. And welcome to DPC - I see this is only your second entry. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future!

I Need Brother :(
by moayad_habas

Comment by moayad_habas:
thank u all :) and yes eyes are bit dark :(

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by gwe21:
awww! great b/w

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by PennyStreet:
Nice candid-type portait - the title helps to portray the story.
I just wish that his eyes were not in the shadow.

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by posthumous:
I'm hanging this in the Posthumous Fantasy Art Gallery.

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by NikonJeb:
I don't get the title, but an interesting angle.....6

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Comment by ikopanas:
I do like this one. It conveys a feeling!

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by andrewt:
The face needs to be better lighted. 5

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by Ter:
the eyes being so dark distract sorry

I Need Brother :(
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Comment by RianBotes:
Eyes are a bit to dark