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01/31/2010 01:09:11 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
A lovely conversion to B&W and a very pensive photograph of the young man. You've captured the emotion well here. Good detail and pretty good light with the exception of the eyes, as some of your commenters have noted. Not sure how you could have added more light to his eyes - the pop-up camera flash as fill, perhaps, but that sometimes can look "fake". I think it can be adjusted to just add a minimum of light - perhaps that is something you might wish to learn about the camera and try at another time. Meanwhile, I think this is quite nice - very thoughtful and a quite nice "in the moment" type of shot. And welcome to DPC - I see this is only your second entry. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future! |
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01/30/2010 09:54:02 AM |
| thank u all :) and yes eyes are bit dark :( |
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01/28/2010 10:44:41 PM |
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01/28/2010 09:44:58 PM |
Nice candid-type portait - the title helps to portray the story.
I just wish that his eyes were not in the shadow. |
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01/28/2010 06:39:16 PM |
| I'm hanging this in the Posthumous Fantasy Art Gallery. |
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01/28/2010 06:35:28 AM |
| I don't get the title, but an interesting angle.....6 |
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01/27/2010 01:11:16 PM |
| I do like this one. It conveys a feeling! |
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01/27/2010 07:56:33 AM |
| The face needs to be better lighted. 5 |
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01/27/2010 03:45:24 AM |
| the eyes being so dark distract sorry |
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01/26/2010 10:43:09 AM |
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01/25/2010 07:13:52 PM |
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01/25/2010 09:27:44 AM |
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01/25/2010 08:13:38 AM |
| nice candid shot...your lighting on the face (eyes in particular) is a little dark...otherwise a really good shot |
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01/24/2010 11:44:28 PM |
| Very sad kid... Seems odd, but this doesn't really impact me like I think it would, not sure why, but just didn't really impact me. Still a solid 6 from me. |
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01/24/2010 08:00:13 PM |
Great portrait! When I first saw your title I thought you were trying to portray sadness, but when I looked at the shot I saw that you have perfectly captured a boy in a state of boredom and it all made sense.
Great framing of the shot and I like the B&W conversion you have done too. |
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01/24/2010 07:41:33 PM |
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01/24/2010 10:02:29 AM |
| I wish the eyes were a little better exposed. If it's candid, then you're forgiven. In any case, I like the feeling of lonliness you've conveyed here. |
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01/23/2010 07:43:01 PM |
| Nice perspective. Could be a tad sharper in the face but nice overall shot. |
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01/23/2010 10:51:57 AM |
| He seems sad. I think you caught his emotions so well. Handsome kid. |
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01/23/2010 01:20:40 AM |
| Great capture. I wish for some light on his eyes. |
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01/22/2010 05:48:04 PM |
| Cute photo, a bit sad, good pose. His eyes are a bit dark, heavy shadows I guess. |
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