Windows of the Soul-EyeS, Bottom1000, #804. Original Score 3.128
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Comment by Neat:
Had potential, the crop is too tight, I don't like that background at all, not very PRO like, seems over sharpened as well esp his eyes. Still having said that, cute kid, and I'm sure a lot better than the original

Audio Technologies: From a Single String to Millions of Hearts
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Comment by posthumous:
great effect. well done.

Home-madeTiramisu Topped Cheesecake with Lady Finger Crust and Choclate Covered Coffee Beans
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Comment by vawendy:
Sounds like something Bear_music would make. :)

I like the pov and the dof. Are the lady fingers a little oversaturated? (color wise, not simple syrup or liqueur-wise. :)

Audio Technologies: From a Single String to Millions of Hearts
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Comment by bjoern:
Refreshingly different.

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Comment by Sheryll:
Drunk?

Home-madeTiramisu Topped Cheesecake with Lady Finger Crust and Choclate Covered Coffee Beans
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Comment by CNovack:
Voted earlier coming back to comment now.

Without the title it would be hard to tell just what exactly the dessert is. I love Tiramisu and chocolate covered coffee beans so it is a winning dessert in the tasty treat category. I know you went in to give us a nice close-up of the tasty details but with a cake I think it would be best to pull back a tad just so we can see the defining shape. The lighting does not show off this dessert to it's fullest potential. There are blown highlights in the top portion of the cake such that the white topside appears as a shapeless flat mass. Better lighting would have captured some contrast and definition of the cake. I think the focus is a little too much on lady finger crust and too little on the chocolate curls, some coffee beans and top of cake. Lastly, I suggest to get rid of the two shades of brown border. It does very little to complement the photo other than act as a distraction to draw attention away from the dessert. The important star of the composition is the Tiramisu, so play that strength up and show it off in all it's glory without any frilly 'dressings' of a distracting border.

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Comment by eyestrange:
'Girlie' :) Looks like a very good night out.

Home-madeTiramisu Topped Cheesecake with Lady Finger Crust and Choclate Covered Coffee Beans
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Comment by hajeka:
Nice work on the dessert, but the border is very dominant here.

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Comment by Melethia:
Drunk. :-)

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Comment by blindjustice:
groupies? I love the woment to the left- so vintage looking.