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skyline
07/27/2009 06:00:09 PM
skyline
by Senay

Comment by HarryY:
Nice shot, bit noisy but well framed. Not a fan of the border much.
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Heart of Stone
07/25/2009 08:33:10 AM
Heart of Stone
by Senay

Comment by macrothing:


Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
Good potential for this Challenge, but the image seems to be more about the sky than the rocks.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
Well done for the straight horizon, however in this image, it being placed almost smack in the middle of the frame isn't enhancing the image, especially the main subject for this Challenge. The rocks look very slightly OOF (out of focus), so it appears that when framing the image in camera you may have been focussed on the water and sky, rather than the fore - but apologies in advance if wrong there.

Composition wise, a much bolder crop eliminating most of the sky would be required to bring these rocks into play more. If you had it from the original shot, more of the bottom area, where the water is foaming around the rocks would have been better included, rather than cropped / 'cut' as it is.

Your title is a little lost on me unless it is that vaguely heart shaped rock a little right of center - if that is the case, then placing that within the frame so as to be the main feature would have strengthened the concept. A much tighter crop to show it would also have been required. Again, probably composing it within the frame so it is not smack center, but rather creating a visual balance, would probably have worked.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
49/82 and 5.35 is a good score for this Challenge and I suspect that the voters were taken with the rich sky, rather than the geological element. Just read your comments and confirms this. The last comment received provides some very good pointers.

Summary
Fill flash for the scene as is may have helped show up more detail in the rocks, but otherwise I think that a much bolder crop and attention paid to where your main subject (the 'heart of stone' rock, if I am not mistaken) is placed within the frame, would have created a more dramatic image in my opinion.
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Heart of Stone
07/21/2009 11:05:07 PM
Heart of Stone
by Senay

Comment by kaiser_chief:
I like the colour you have acheived with the sky in this shot. The midday sun though causes quite harsh shaddows and flat lighting, which does not help the overall image.......Also, the crop on the right seems a little awkward.
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Heart of Stone
07/19/2009 06:07:30 PM
Heart of Stone
by Senay

Comment by monster91:
nice clouds, they give the shot a sense of direction.
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Heart of Stone
07/19/2009 08:05:07 AM
Heart of Stone
by Senay

Comment by GregoryB:
Cool and peaceful image. Especially like the wispy cloud formations
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Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
07/07/2009 02:52:21 PM
Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
by Senay

Comment by klkitchens:
Never heard of junk mail called spam...
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Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
07/02/2009 10:58:24 PM
Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
by Senay

Comment by DJWoodward:
Challenge Relevance:7 Impact/Emotion/Mood:6 Technicals:5.5 Processing:5.5 Creativity:6
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Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
07/02/2009 10:20:54 PM
Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
by Senay

Comment by dtremain:
Smiles. Cute idea. Lighting is a bit strong on the front of the mailbox, reflected on the inside of the lid, and on the SPAM can. If you used a flash (and it looks like you did), try backing up a few more steps and using the zoom (or crop). If that is not enough, try a bit different angle on the lid, so it bounces the light away from the lens.
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Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
07/02/2009 09:06:46 PM
Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
by Senay

Comment by liberty:
Nice idea, crop seems a little tight. 5
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Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
07/02/2009 06:01:11 PM
Spam Mail Has Gone Too Far!
by Senay

Comment by Sirashley:
Is that why my mail box stinks when I don't get the mail for a week? Good concept.
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