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Broken Lantern
08/07/2009 04:19:00 PM
Broken Lantern
by kyagudin

Comment by macrothing:


Critique Club Critique

First Impressions
Struggling to get the Challenge connection. I voted in this Challenge and I gave this image a 3.

Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
The image is fairly sharp for a 1/15 sec exposure. After reading your Photographer's Comments, I understand the opportunity you saw and therefore 'get' the concept, but I don't think it has been achieved, or at least with this little context, to be able to display it in an image for someone to grasp, who didn't witness the street scene itself. Especially for this Challenge, voters likely wanted to discern that the image was taken 'from above' and I don't think the elements and feel for this image give that impression.

Comments, Score & Placement Review
105/141 and a score of 4.88 I guess reflect what I have said above. I presume this score is likely because of the lack of connection that voters had, rather than the quality of the image.

Your commenters mostly all say the same thing: that they see an abstract here, which again, for this Challenge of 'From Above II', an abstract is a much more difficult image to have in this 'race'.

They are all helpful comments, albeit somewhat subtle, especially as to why they voted an average of 5.75.

Summary
I like the concept, but as I mentioned above, if you had shown more context, with possibly a few more reflections to show more of the lantern and perhaps also more of the puddle/context of the street, it may have allowed the image to connect with the voters better.
Broken Lantern
07/13/2009 07:48:47 PM
Broken Lantern
by kyagudin

Comment by neophyte:
Interesting abstract.
Broken Lantern
07/09/2009 09:57:04 PM
Broken Lantern
by kyagudin

Comment by bob350:
Nice abstract.
Broken Lantern
07/09/2009 09:54:14 PM
Broken Lantern
by kyagudin

Comment by DJWoodward:
Challenge Relevance:5.5 Impact/Emotion/Mood:5 Technicals:5 Processing:5 Creativity:5.5
Broken Lantern
07/09/2009 08:10:47 PM
Broken Lantern
by kyagudin

Comment by scooter97:
This looks like a reflection of the lantern. It's pretty hard to recognize but it does meet the challenge.
Sunset Fishing
07/07/2009 09:47:01 PM
Sunset Fishing
by kyagudin

Comment by JacksonGariety:
I love how the net catches the sunlight, just like a photographic net should!
Sunset Fishing
07/04/2009 06:12:14 AM
Sunset Fishing
by kyagudin

Comment by Covert_Oddity:
Nice image. I like the way the two figures are silhouetted against the orange sky, while the net actually has some detail.
Sunset Fishing
07/02/2009 06:52:24 PM
Sunset Fishing
by kyagudin

Comment by KarenNfld:
An interesting photo, it shows us something we don't see often. I like the colours.
Sunset Fishing
07/01/2009 12:29:06 PM
Sunset Fishing
by kyagudin

Comment by Ja-9:
love the silhouettes with the sun bouncing off the net to the right...this is well done...excellent processing
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