Dead Photographers Cult
by ClubJuggle

Comment by kiwiness:
You can run but you can't hide. Terry you are becoming recognisable, you are your own best model right :)

Dead Photographers Cult
by ClubJuggle

Comment by hotpasta:
excellent and true to challenge...great mystery about the shot conveyed through the lighting

Dead Photographers Cult
by ClubJuggle

Comment by yanko:
Great idea and execution. If this was used on a poster I would expect it to be processed more to boost constrast further so as to stand out more at a larger distance. 8.

Elvis Sighted At Parade!
by ClubJuggle

Comment by DefyTime:
Great shot for the challenge...funny

Many Hands Make Light Work
by ClubJuggle

Comment by 3DsArcher:
Nice photograph. I really like the tones but I probably would have cropped out the black area on the left.

Many Hands Make Light Work
by ClubJuggle

Comment by DefyTime:
Great work

Bonjour!
by ClubJuggle

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

I hate getting the site council pics .. but here ya go :)

First Impression - the most important one:
Love the concept .. looks a little unnatural/uncomfortable.

Composition:
This is nicely done, the use of the different panes is ok ... but could have been played further by having the hand fully in the first bottom pane. The model (I know its you) looks uncomfortable ... don't know why as you have photographed yourself before ... oh well.

Subject:
Meets the challenge.. and how does it ... just hang the window from the ceiling .. this is a unique take on the challenge .. at least you got no reflection.

Technical (Colour and light):
Love the colours ... black and white I think may have been overkill ... the strong colours against the white really do work.

To grow its vote?:
Couple of things .. think of yourself as a model when you are ... and what the photographer would say ... loosen up .. relax ... also try several different crops .. this may have worked better using the actual frame as the crop ...

Summary:
I think this is a good shot .. this is also out of the box .. so keep thinking that way.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Message edited by author 2006-05-06 22:25:58.

Many Hands Make Light Work
by ClubJuggle

Comment by Claya:
Composition just doesn't work that well for me. They seem to be rowing out of the picture.

Many Hands Make Light Work
by ClubJuggle

Comment by katie-belle:
nice contrasts

Many Hands Make Light Work
by ClubJuggle

Comment by ragde_77:
Great shot!