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InsomniacComment by snaffles: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: Ooh, I get to do this one! I gave it a 7 during voting and am very glad I did. Still makes me giggle looking at it. Don't know why I didn't give it an 8.
Technical: OMG there's a shadow on the wall!!!! AAAAAHHH!!! Ok, now that that's out of my system - nicely lit, great undistractng set, colours are nice and pop well, love the little flip of hair covering her eye. PP not obvious, always a bonus.
Artistic: HUGE kudos to Telma and Filipe! Her expression of 'Oh, am I getting any tonight?...nahhh' and his expression of 'Nahhh, leave me alone woman' are just absolutely wonderful. My only nitpick is the hunk of green on the covers, is that meant to be money?
Overall: Still very funny, and clearly the majority of commenters think so too. And you got an honourable mention and considering that humour is a very subjective topic, you clearly struck a nerve. Well done!
Feel free to pm me with any questions,
Susan
Message edited by author 2010-01-21 22:39:04.