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Roses Bloom
02/26/2010 02:17:50 PM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by sarampo:
Hi Alexander, greetings from the Critique Club!

Regarding your shot:

Composition
I believe that you didn't quite consider the background when shooting your photo. If the emphasis was to be given to the roses, then both the bottom right element and the top one out of focus shouldn't be there, they distract you of the foreground. When composing your photo, get accustomed to sweep the viewfinder clockwise to check all the elements. Think of what you want to communicate and then compose accordingly.

Technique / Lighting
The photo is a bit dark, a greater aperture should help this, and the stem of the rose would be green instead of nearly black.

Processing
Nice sharpness, and you could have made use of the full 800px size limit, it's smaller and for that you lose impact.
As a side note, please don't forget to include the EXIF information in your photos, your previous ones had it, but the way you saved this one stripped the image of that information, and that is a vital part of the image validation rules (at least for the original files).

Overall
Steadily you're building your average score, and if you remember a few basic rules, than you just need to use your imagination.

If you have any questions feel free to contact me.
Regards,
Joao
Roses Bloom
02/23/2010 11:31:39 PM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by tiffmin133:
This picture captures the essence of love, absolutley breathtaking =)
Roses Bloom
02/20/2010 12:52:00 PM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by FourPointX:
nice subject not sure i like the shallow dof 6
Roses Bloom
02/20/2010 12:43:04 PM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by justine:
My impression is this wasn't shot with much thought. The composition is weak and hurts the over all shot. Your color is lovely and the focus is pretty good.
Roses Bloom
02/19/2010 09:50:36 AM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by herfotoman:
Too many distractions in the background/ right side
Roses Bloom
02/18/2010 08:50:40 PM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by jayzundel:
Beautiful
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Roses Bloom
02/18/2010 12:36:49 AM
Roses Bloom
by al1989

Comment by Luci11e:
the plus on this is the sharp focus on the rose; i think the babys breath should be around the roses and I like the line leading out of the picture by the trees
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Bench For Ortiz
06/01/2009 09:24:22 AM
Bench For Ortiz
by al1989

Comment by mikears:
Nice shot - Too bad the ENTIRE bench wasn't in the frame, but that's a nit-pick!!
Bench For Ortiz
05/27/2009 12:35:28 PM
Bench For Ortiz
by al1989

Comment by bob350:
Bench shapes are interesting. The color contrast of the dappled light and bits of grass makes me wonder how this would look in black and white.
Bench For Ortiz
05/27/2009 09:20:23 AM
Bench For Ortiz
by al1989

Comment by carlo:
I don't understand why you chopped some of the chair off—your main and only subject.
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