In the Future... Lock the Door!
by PSUBecker

Comment by Alpine99:
Not sure what glimpse of the future you are giving me here.. Still like the image so 5

In the Future... Lock the Door!
by PSUBecker

Comment by timmi:
This image portrais fear well. It is a bit pixelated. Are you using too much JPG compression? A tiny bit of brightening would also help.

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by giants:
I really love this photo. It really leaves a lot for the imagination! Good job!

Looking Out
by PSUBecker

Comment by CraigD:
I like the subject, but the changing background out of focus, seems to busy for such a large negative space. My eyes seem drawn to the purple flowers instead of your subject.

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by tarique:
An allusion of a lone woman lying naked doesn't really work, There has to be another pair of legs, male if you want to be conventional or better female if you want to be sensational... Also the positioning of the lingerie looks too forced. Also everything is too sharply in focus to seem secret / mysterious, Why did you chop off the knee?

You have a good idea here try soft focus , different angle and add one more model :)

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by Konador:
Theres a lot of compression above the bottom leg, and it looks over-sharpened to me. I think this is the type of photo that could benefit from soft-focusing.

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by casualgal:
Fun, think ahead next time and bring a blanket! Fit the challenge??

Secret Places
by PSUBecker

Comment by azzemoto:
I like your idea and I would have rated this even higher if I felt that you were on topic a little more. Good Job!

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by PSUBecker:
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Message edited by author 2003-08-06 01:42:22.

The First Mistake
by PSUBecker

Comment by banmorn:
This is pretty good, THe comp is ok but nothing stunning, You might have postitioned the model better to block more of the obvious modern road/paths above Eve's left shoulder. The coloring of the model is very nice, as is the lighting of the whole piece, like the backlighting. I also like that she is not looking into the camera, but around the surroundings to make sure the almighty is not around. Nice work.

Now isn't that Alot better than "macro, bug, nice flower, be more original - 3"..,..you might get more comments without your apparent begging if you learned to comment more constructively your self.