Ice-Station
by diverss

Comment by Ammie:
Idea is very very good. It is not as sharp as one would have liked.

Ice-Station
by diverss

Comment by stratblues:
you might consider cropping the right and left sides a bit.

Clean it first
by diverss

Comment by Danger_Weasel:
SWEET

Clean it first
by diverss

Comment by Shutter-For-Hire:
Nice stop motion! background could use some lights to make it more white and brighter

Clean it first
by diverss

Comment by Sirashley:
great color and nice movement in the water

Clean it first
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Comment by ralph:
more seperation from the backgrd & a second light to make the background WHITE
grey just looks ugly
good concept

Clean it first
by diverss

Comment by Adamsw216:
A tad too much tone recovery going on here. I think I would have much preferred a tighter crop on the apple.

STEP ON IT
by diverss

Comment by rlewis:
out of focus, if it were in focus it could be really good

Singing Waterfall
by diverss

Comment by BJokerud:
My first thought was "This looks the small creek behind my house", because it's so small. I can imagine that there was a bit hard to get any closer, but this photo deserves to appear bigger.

Alone at night
by diverss

Comment by photokariangel:
This is Kari Ann, greetings from the Critique Club:

composition: a different composition could have helped this image drastically. The subject (tree) is too centered in the frame, and without any interesting surrounding elements (spare the water) helping pull the viewer in, this composition is too boring

color: The colors are strange and a little too one-toned for most tastes, including my own.

contrast: more contrast could have really helped this image as well. everything seems too flat and monotonous.

focus: focus is a little on the soft side, but reasonable for such a long shutter speed

depth of field: perhaps a f-stop of 8.0-16 would have been more effective here, producing a sharper image, and more depth of field

lighting: unique night lighting, the lights in the background, however, only serve as a distraction to me. but if they were kept for a reason, then disregard.

other: tweaking with the tones, the color and the composition could really have helped this image out a lot. This photo has no 'pop' factor for the viewer, and thus resulting in the below average ending. I do hope, however, that this has given you a chance to learn from a few misshaps, and grow stronger as a photographer. I also hope you enjoy your newfound time here at DPC, and look very much forward to the growth of your portfolio in the months to come. If you have any further questions, feel free to PM me.
-Kari Ann