Motion Study
by franktheyank

Comment:
umm

it to me does look better if you flip it so the head is upright, gives it feeling of freefalling

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by jhomrighaus

Comment:
nothing is sharp at all in this shot and yoru flying space ships hurt the shot. redo the shot, but better this time, put your hand up on the right side of the picture and see if choppign some off does not make it more pleasing to look at

Message edited by author 2009-07-25 18:12:56.

Forks crossed
by hajeka

Comment:
It is a pair fo forks hard to make artistic at the best of time. You coulld have flipped the canvas so that they where standing up upright, that instantly gives it a different angle and looks more interesting , it need some depthmaybe a soft billowing cloth behind it to add some curves and depths

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by mgsmith53

Comment:
really not sure what to say on this, amazing motion blur, but the candian goose behind kinda looks like he has a bandage on his ody. there needs to bee a bit more contrast in this and a crop that chops off the bottom and top a little

Hold
by VivaLaAlexander

Comment:
your other one is in voting right now. for this one, i would make it bigger for a start, and flip it so the stones point upwards, it would give it more interest

Le Croix Flambé
by GeneralE

Comment:
oh it does look crooked though

Le Croix Flambé
by GeneralE

Comment:
yah, i think you have beat all my pills.

all i can say is add some zeros, take it to Sedona and mount it and you will make a friggin fortune

Thin Ice
by David Ey

Comment:
the only thing i get from this shot is that you moved the camera. nothing interesting about this shot whatsoever.

if you are trying to go for drama, then i would suggest a longer exposer with a black piece of board, then have the sign going down adn down and down, now that would make it appear as though something was falling. Apart from that , nothing really I can think of would help or hinder this shot

moody swamp
by bergiekat

Comment:
I like it, i think you could have done a little bit more with teh shadows in the background to give it some depth. right now it is just a blank wall. Just at the bottom of the water with darkness raising up to blur into the landscape, give it a feeling of never ending ending less. you could make this as moody as you want and it still wouldnt be overkill. my fav out of everyones so far

The Industrial Revolution Continues
by David Ey

Comment:
well not a lot you can say about this really, once you have got past the wow factor it is all sort of plastic looking. I think you could have done so much more with contrasts and shadows and highlights, even adding a tiny tiny bit of grain would have giving it some realistic feeling. I bet you could have blown peoples socks off with this if it had been advanved and could have dodged and burnt those back panels.