Young Lady
by dtremain

Comment:
I need a bit more detail... especially in the eyes... Perhaps a catchlight would raise your score a bit. The green necklace is drawing attention away from her face. A bit of darkening would have helped that, I think. But... that's just my opinion. Others may love this. I do love the composition. That's perfect.

Parsol Weather
by PetRock

Comment:
The lighting, I fear, is too flat to score really well here. I need some shadow to give depth to the image. I do like the composition, but I think the processing is too harsh to flatter your model.

Joan portrait
by dante21

Comment:
I'm not a fan of cutting off appendages at the joints (ankle) and she appears to be a bit in pain... I'd have cloned or "healed" the legs a bit in spots, but I love the lighting and the processing. 6

She wears the "hat" in the family
by BEL_Clark

Comment:
Could be brighter... (the brightest spot should be the focal point, her face)... but I love the composition! 6

Hannah
by BarbB

Comment:
I think there's almost too much here. I might rather just see the three in the black inset. Still a 7

Natural Woman
by Rodert

Comment:
Wow... she's gorgeous and so is your photography! BEAUTIFUL job by both of you. Back to vote... 9

A Piece of Me
by RamblinR

Comment:
Sooo well done. 10

What My Alter Ego Really Thinks About My Blackberry
by seethroughmylens

Comment:
Great idea... I love it! The processing could be better... not the adding of the mini you... but the original image. Seems... uhhh... too processed. But, that could be my monitor. The Mini Me's addition is very clean. Well done.

Young Girl
by gsal

Comment:
The empty bowl... I know it's supposed to say something, but it's throwing the image off balance to me. WAY off balance. Perhaps if the child were looking at the bowl... or even facing toward it instead of away... It's too bright to not be noticed and, perhaps takes the focus away from the child. Still... a 6 from me.

Diana
by franktheyank

Comment:
Creepy. But... Well done. 10