candid muscle
by xtian

Comment:
The man is staring right at the camera. Not candid.

I'm Just The Cook
by Mr_Pants

Comment:
A but over-processed, skin tones are a bit too purple. Greens don't look too good. The bokeh of this lens isn't too great. Good composition though. You'd have been better off cloning out his right arm. The feel of the photo is a bit too drab and depressing for my taste.

True Romance
by Snake

Comment:
Pet peeve... chopping off fingers when most of the hand is in shot. The green sepia looks terrible. But you've caught a nice moment. It almost looks posed, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. You could crop much tighter, there's way too much negative space at the top. I don't like it that you can't read the writing on the t-shirt, be careful if there's text in a photo. It makes you want to read the rest of it.

Melancholy Striptease
by hannka

Comment:
The camera has not been kind to her, and she's out of focus. If this is a real candid, the photo is hugely invasive.

Weary
by roba

Comment:
Interesting shot, the clothes make the shot work here. Her expression isn't really exceptional enough to make the shot really stand out. There's not enough of a story to draw us in.

Locked Out
by birdyblue

Comment:
The left hand and rail spoils the profile of the man's face. Composition feels cluttered and unbalanced. Man's face is too high in frame. Not sure what you're communicating here.

Begger Man and his Dog
by Shaman

Comment:
Post processing totally gratuitous and makes the texture of the clothes look awful. The dog doesn't work in the shot at all as you can't see it's face. Composition feels unbalanced, too much negative space in top left of frame. Skin tones too purple. Doorframe growing out of man's head.

Sharing
by DUCATISTA

Comment:
Needs both subjects to be in focus. Not sure b&w helps your photo here. Background is distracting. Dog's lead takes away from shot and leads eye out of the frame. Subject doesn't really interest me, it looks more like a family snapshot.

Envy
by PaulE

Comment:
A bit snapshottish... I don't think the man's expression is extreme enough to carry the photo. The light is pretty harsh. The background isn't good... being at a different angle to avoid trees growing out of the car would have helped. The colours arent' easy on the eye. It's a bit too contrasty. The car's shadow reflects the bad choice of time for light. Crop feels a bit too tight on the left.

memories...
by IreneM

Comment:
What a gorgeous candid, superb subject and great expression/timing. The composition isn't amazing though, I'd have placed her more to the left. Currently, you have a lot of space in the left side of the photo which doesn't serve much purpose. Also, try not to chop off people's elbows if you have most of it in the frame. I wish her right hand was sharper.