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| 01/30/2003 10:20:49 PM |
Highway 314by vjozComment: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
The composition of this is very good. Everything works together to draw the eyes from the left side of the frame up and into it. The position of the sign, and the road on the right really make the shot feel balanced to me. The lights also add the the complete/balanced feeling by running counter to the sign and road.
TECHNIQUE
In my opinion, I think the exposure may have been a touch long on this. Though it produces excellent focus, the lights and some of the spots on the snow are almost blown out, detracting from the rest of the picture. Having said that, it does give a certain effect, which I will discuss in a moment. The crop works very well as it allows just the subject to show, without a lot of extraneous "stuff" being involved.
OVERALL EFFECT
Though technically the brighter spots are blown out, it adds a certain atmosphere to the picture,so it may be more effective than not. It gives a certain "rushed" or urgent feeling, though there is clearly none, or very little traffic. the high contrast makes it is an edgy picture, meaning that it is not peaceful or relaxing, so if that was the look you were going for, you did well. Well done, and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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| 01/30/2003 04:55:04 PM |
Once Upon A Timeby mariomelComment: Wonderful composition and framing. I wish you could have captured this when the shadows in the front were a touch longer. That would have added to the desolate feeling, I think. Nevertheless, wonderful capture.
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| 01/30/2003 04:54:13 PM |
Waitingby emorgan49Comment: Wonderful composition and I love the "emotion" on his face. Hope you gave him a doggie biscuit or something for posing. |
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| 01/30/2003 04:52:23 PM |
Inspiredby PtmanComment: I love the perspective on this, and I like how it looks crowded at the top, though ordinarily I wouldn't. Great colors and capture! |
| 01/30/2003 04:49:52 PM |
FIRE !!by daysezComment: The composition here is static to me, because the shot is straight on, and it is so centered. However, I think it is an awesome idea. I'm not crazy about wild things in post processing, but yours is one that I feel has been done very well. It enhances the photo, without being overbearing. Good work. |
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| 01/30/2003 04:33:18 PM |
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| 01/30/2003 12:39:02 PM |
The Sanctuary by RackatComment: I love the composition, and the colors. The blue is really an attention getter! |
| 01/30/2003 12:34:26 PM |
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| 01/30/2003 12:33:40 PM |
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| 01/30/2003 12:30:31 PM |
Through the Keyholeby jimmyn4Comment: That's a cool effect. I think a different crop, maybe so that the light was either exactly centered, or a little bit more off, would have given an overall better balanced feeling. |
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