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| 06/11/2008 01:41:13 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 05:05:23 PM |
Self Portraitby ShugPugComment: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Very well done self portrait. I like the "closeness" of it, and the fact that you haven't felt it necessary to include all of the head. That really forces attention to the eyes.
Also, I think that you have done a superb job with the focus, lighting, contrast, etc. in this shot. It is technically very well done, and a strong image.
I think what might be missing is something for the viewer to connect with. While I like the clean background, sometimes having something there helps to provide a context for the shot that this doesn't have. Also, your expression is largely indecipherable, but you look a bit nervous/unsure of yourself. Not enough to for the viewers to relate to, but you don't look completely relaxed, either.
Again, I think this was a strong image that met the challenge well. Best to you in future challenges.
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| 06/10/2008 04:32:13 PM |
At Day's End by LydiaComment: An instance where a centered composition works really well. Nicely done. |
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| 06/10/2008 04:31:49 PM |
Untitledby ososnilknarfComment: My favorite in the challenge. The lighting on this is, imo, perfect. Enough is lit that it is obvious it is a "cowboy," but enough is "hidden," that it could be any man. Great composition. |
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| 06/10/2008 04:31:00 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 04:30:41 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 04:30:25 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 04:21:53 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 04:21:29 PM |
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| 06/10/2008 04:20:42 PM |
best.friends.for.lifeby phreakComment: The crop is a bit too "narrow" left to right, I think. It feels like it needs to be "opened" up a bit more. |
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