Rascal at the Window
by lochiano

Comment:
I don't see how this photo fits in the 'technology' concept... Maybe I'm missing something here... - setzler

Toyota Prius Hybrid Display
by DigiPique

Comment:
This is a neat display, but it's a little outside the realm of what I like to see as a photograph... - setzler

cellphone
by undieyatch

Comment:
technology, yes... you have caputred 'technology' in this photo. What sets a great photo apart from a 'good' photo is some special quality or 'artistic' touch. This photo has an interesting compisition for sure, but there is just something missing from it... I belive the focus is slightly soft here. Sharpening this one up a tad would definitely make it more appealing in my eyes... also, maybe a slight rotation of her head towards the camera where I could see an eye... the door window in the background is also a slight distraction since it creates a fairly strong irrelevant contrast in the image... This particular image has the beginning of a very nice shot... - setzler

Circuits For The Future
by AquaGoddess12880

Comment:
In the 'technology' challenge, I expected to see a lot of photos of circuit boards. Knowing this, I believe that these photos need to be done more creatively in an attempt to make them stand out. How could you have made this photograph more impactive? If you are new to the challenge concept, one thing you may consider is ASSUMING that there will be several other photos like yours each week. In many cases, there are! With this in mind, you need to create impact.... - setzler

Technology? Not genuine
by bcncrazy

Comment:
I like your choice of subjects... there are two issues here that I think really hurt this image... 1 - the flash. The on cam flash rarely produces good quality and effective lighting for an 'artistic' image. 2 - the angle. I think you could have possibly worked a stronger angle on this shot to create some more impact... - setzler

Compact
by paully2k1

Comment:
focus :) - setzler

Technology?
by troyad

Comment:
Hmmm... sometimes i wonder if photos are submitted just for fun or if they photographer actually takes the challenge seriously. The good thing about this photo is that you rotated your subject to offest the balance... that is the beginning of a good composition :) - setzler

My future Son!
by vtruan

Comment:
This is cool technology, but as a photograph, I don't care much for it... I know this shot has deep meaning to you, but it's not something that is strong compositionally or subjectively for me... - setzler

It All Started With Sticks and Stones
by BigHusker001

Comment:
It actually all started way before that... I'm not doing a good job of fitting this photo to the challenge... - setzler

Telescopio de Conquistadores
by Isaac

Comment:
I'm not really sure how to critique this... you have photographed someone else's art, but you have added your own twist... I would have rather seen a subject that you created... - setzler