Future Travel in Production
by EizlAw

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

When I first viewed this photograph, I did not really see 'Travel' in it. The image itself does not show travel taking place or a mode of travel. I do see your intent with the photo, but I think, in general, you may have deviated too far from the theme of the challenge to score better with this image.

I think a little lower angle possibly would be an improvement so that the information on the computer screen is more visible to the viewer. With an image like this, however, the viewer will have to spend too much time viewing to really grasp your interpretation of the challenge. For this reason, I believe that your comments were few and far between. There is nothing here that grabbed the viewer and said "spend some time looking at me" :)

Technically, I don't see any problems with this image at all. Subjectively, I think it could have been stronger.

The technical ability tells me that you can definitely have command of your camera... keep plugging :)

John Setzler

Romeo & Juliet Love Theme (A Time for Us)
by KarenB

Comment:
This is a beautiful composition... I wish the red/yellow tint could have been kept off the keys and the score of music tho... great shot :)

train window
by KAOS

Comment:
should have scored much higher....

train window
by KAOS

Comment:
beautiful shot and excellent exposure to go along with it :) I can still see all the details in the darker areas and nothing in the window is blown out. I believe this is my favorite image in this challenge.. great work :) - 10 - setzler

Prodigy
by inspzil

Comment:
Children are great subjects for photographs. I think this particular shot would be much stronger (as would be with most child shots) if it was taken from a lower angle. Adults seem to naturally want to point the camera down at children. This seems to accent the fact that they are small. Your image impact could change dramatically if you shoot from the same level as the child, or even below level :) - setzler

self image
by undieyatch

Comment:
Very nice high key work.. the shadows and light work with great strength in this image.. the black shirt creates perfect contrast. The only thing I would change here would be to crop a thin slice off the left to remove whatever that is that is creating the 'edge contrast'... great shot.. = 9 - setzler

A Little Down Time
by RiderGal

Comment:
very nice shot... i love the even tones across your subject in this one... the only thing that is possibly an area for improvement woudl be to either have her eyes all the way open or all the way closed. The model's right eye (viewer's left eye) is also significantly darker than the other... maybe a minor change in lighting or a bounce flash from above would even that out some... very good work.. = 9 - setzler

The Blue Lagoon
by arnit

Comment:
This image has a very nice sort of mystery to it.. i love the look and her big eyes... I think the only thing that bugs me on this a little is the negative space in the top of the frame... I may like this particular shot better if some, but not all, of that was cropped out... great shot.. = 9 - setzler

Bold
by Alecia

Comment:
Too bad he's not as hot as i am :) great shot... = 9 - setzler

35 Years
by albright1

Comment:
very nice job on this one... a very endearing photo.. good work :) - setzler