zebra drops
by shutterfly

Comment:
excellent shot :) I think a little more light would create some more contrast and really make this photo punch hard... great work :) - setzler

Color Wheel
by kandyj

Comment:
nice abstract... the color and patterns here work very well... - setzler

In the Spotlight
by aussie

Comment:
This is a neat shot and I like the blue tint... the centered composition doesn't seem to work as well for me though... - setzler

Hexagonal
by FranziskaLang

Comment:
very nice study of patterns here.. the only improvement i could suggest woudl be either going to black and white or making some white balance adjustments to remove the yellow tint.... nice work though :) - setzler

Calla Lily
by jodiecoston

Comment:
amazing photo... the softness of this shot is phenomenal and the curves are enticing... GREAT shot :) = 10 - setzler

Step Up to the Mike
by alanfreed

Comment:
very nice macro... the detail and depth of field are excellent... I think it would be even better if the microphone was turned to an angle... great shot :) - setzler

curve
by imagesloyola

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

This image has a very interesting abstract quality to it... The cardboard roll patterns and the concentric circles create some nice shapes and textures in this image.

Compositionally, I believe either putting the subject a little more off center or creating a little tighter crop on the top and bottom would possibly enhance the overall image.

The color contrast in this image is excellent. The depth of field also nicely blurs out the environment and keeps the focus on the subject...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Time Never Stops
by Gotchya

Comment:
This is a really nice abstract... the color tone also sets it off nicely... great shot :) - setzler

Standing Out
by Natasha

Comment:
Natasha, this is a beautiful shot.. great work :)

... I see industry
by takethat

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Takethat...

This photo definitely meets the challenge theme of 'from above' without doubt. The camera angle also creates an interesting tilt on the horizon.

Compositionally, I think the photo is ok. I think it is simply lacking a strong subject overall. It's an interesting scene as a whole, but the subject material, in my opinion, is not creating a high impact photo for me.

When you start considering your ideas for challenge photos, you may want to spend equal amounts of time considering your subject choices and your challenge theme. This shot is all about the challenge theme, but weak on the subject in my opinion...

Keep up the good efforts :)

John Setzler