A Cold Wait
by Sonifo

Comment:
Sonifo, this is definitely an excellent shot... the long shutter really worked well for you and it added a nice element to the shot. As for improvement, I don't think there is a lot you could do to improve this shot. Maybe have the person/lightpost a little more off center to the left, but I have no idea what that would introduce to the photo on the right.... great shot :) - setzler

Faded Memories
by Gracechild7

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Gracechild...

Your photo works nicely for the 'time' challenge. The composition is strong and I really like the theme you are relating with this photo.

I don't know much about the camera you have, but this photo, as mentioned in earlier comments, would be much stronger if it was larger. I also think that the overexposure on this photo could be a bit damaging overall as well. Personally, I think a darker exposure would somewhat enhance the theme you are working with in this image...

Keep up the good work :)

John Setzler

Wilting Away
by jenarom

Comment:
beautiful shot... the lighting is phenomenal and i really like the centered composition also... = 10 - setzler

Decophone
by mbardeen

Comment:
very nice work with the detail... this is a nice abstract and the lighting is excellent... - setzler

Smoothie
by justine

Comment:
This looks like a great product photo for sure... lol.. looks like my bathroom counter also :) I think a very minor desaturation on the yellow channel would help a bit here... there seems to be just a tiny bit of yellow tint in the lower right portion of the frame on the shaving cream... great shot :) - setzler

Sheer Concentration
by Swashbuckler

Comment:
excellent closeup :) The detail is excellent and that little piece of red tongue really works well here... great shot :) - setzler

Stained Light
by Tarbini

Comment:
This is a beautiful shot... the color is amazing... great eye to capture this :) - setzler

Behind Enemy Lines
by arnit

Comment:
excellent use of depth of field to isolate your subject... great lighting as well :) - setzler

Ready for use
by johnmk

Comment:
very nice composition here... the color is excellent and the lighting is nice also... great work :) - setzler

Lady Iris
by scab-lab

Comment:
beautiful work with the lighting on this one... the yellow/purple/greem combination here is excellent... the diagonal is strong as well... excellent shot :) - setzler